So much better than the most of your music...
But I still want you to either make an actual track yourself(with your keyboard or using virtual instruments). Oh and your ending was very abrupt. I advise that you add some reverb or something onto that last part where just that harmonica loop is playing.
On the good side though I beieve it was well organized, but i think i must give partial credit to Erik for that. And speaking of erik, GOOD JOB on the drums erik. Some pretty crafty stuff you got going.
Overall a good sound. Oh by the way, I am about to post a song called "Kingdom in the Sky" that you should probably check out. It'll probably be on here by the time you read this message.
See ya.